I know my limitations.. i cant write poems.. i cant even rhyme words.. i cant get my point across.. but not matter what happens, i am sure i would never EVER "publish" any of my poems.. especially after i found this..
A Tragedy BY Theo Marzials
Death!
Plop.
The barges down in the river flop.
Flop, plop.
Above, beneath.
From the slimy branches the grey drips drop,
As they scraggle black on the thin grey sky,
Where the black cloud rack-hackles drizzle and fly
To the oozy waters, that lounge and flop
On the black scrag piles, where the loose cords plop,
As the raw wind whines in the thin tree-top.
Plop, plop. // WTF IS THIS PLOP?????
And scudding by
The boatmen call out hoy! and hey!
All is running water and sky,
And my head shrieks -- "Stop,"
And my heart shrieks -- "Die."
My thought is running out of my head;
My love is running out of my heart,
My soul runs after, and leaves me as dead,
For my life runs after to catch them -- and fled
They all are every one! -- and I stand, and start,
At the water that oozes up, plop and plop,
On the barges that flop
And dizzy me dead.
I might reel and drop.
Plop.
Dead.
And the shrill wind whines in the thin tree-top
Flop, plop.
A curse on him.
Ugh! yet I knew -- I knew --
If a woman is false can a friend be true?
It was only a lie from beginning to end --
My Devil -- My "Friend"
I had trusted the whole of my living to!
Ugh; and I knew!
Ugh!
So what do I care,
And my head is empty as air --
I can do,
I can dare,
(Plop, plop
The barges flop
Drip drop.)
I can dare! I can dare!
And let myself all run away with my head
And stop.
Drop.
Dead.
Plop, flop.
Plop. //SERIOUSLY WTF???
Seriously.. this guy is called a "poet"... come on!!!! my dead grandma is more linguistically creative...
I think i should seriously take up poetry as a hobby..
I'd probably give the vogons a run for their money..
hmmm...
lets give this a shot..
the sky
its bright
as blue as emptiness
the empty world seems so big
as big as it should
just enough to make me feel insignificant
i wonder why this doesn't rhyme
does tat give you a poetic license?
//(oh my god this is boring!)
sigh..
i think i should open a shop..
HEY! i know how to rhyme tat..
PLOP!!! (no wonder he uses it so often..)